Poem - Draft #2 - Need criticism?

How can one criticize ones emotive content. You are the one who feels these words more than anyone else. We can perhaps critique the poem, which I think is very good,but we could never see them as you do. Yes, many of us have been through similar experiences, but we aren't you are we. I feel that you are overwhelmed with anger and loss and pion that it almost transcends you to another level of awareness. I think the most positive aspect of this, is putting it into words, not just before you but for other people to read, because you feel the need for positive reinforcement. We all know, bad things happen to good people, I guess I can't reiterate that enough. Hopefully one day you'll wake up and there will be something different about that morning, I presume when that day comes you'll be the first to know.